Last year blog post

Hey guys, this is the last year for the year six's and some of us started in room 1 and room 2. When we were five and some started like last year the teachers and office lady's mostly for helping me when I need help and when I get hurt Hay park school is the best school ever and. I have the best memorises in Hay park school when ever I drive past I all ways look at it so I hope you enjoy reading thanks.

Blog post

Hi everyone,
So this is my blog comment that I commented on a person's blog it is about Morse code. So we had a spread sheet and there were links to blogs and we all had links to blogs each to comment on but my one didn't work. Eventually I had to comment on some else's and  I comment on a person called Lucas and he has interesting information about Morse so this is my comment i hope you like it.

I remember when...

Talofa lava,

This is my I remember when slide my whole class done this because we have to do something the we remember at our school because we are leaving. To Waikowhai intermediate next year so it is our last year here at Hay park school so this blog post is about what was our favorite thing the you remembered at Hay park school so here it goes the favorite thing I remember at Hay park school. Is when I was little and I was in room one I always like going to the up the ship and stirring the wheel and playing that's the favorite thing I remembered at Hay park school.  

Blog comment

Hey guys, so this is my blog comment that I commented on a person from May Road it was part of our things that we had to do and this is my blog comment  and I hope you in enjoy it.

Passion project

Hey guys,
so this is the passion project that I was talking about and the some of us are doing it and some are not so in the passion it shows what gear you. Need when you are in a soccer team and it also tells you the rules and for soccer and the position and also put a video which is our progress  on skills I hope you like it.

Passion project pitch

Selamat pagi,
This is my Passion project pitch that me Lolo, Arnav and Sitaleki did and we are talking  about soccer if you do not know what is a passion project pitch is it is a project that we plan and what we do have to do for our actual passion project so I hope you like it.

Thinkboard

Malo e lelei, This is another think broad that I done is when you have to estimate the answer and this is the answer that I got. Also and it shows how I worked it out like the other thinkboards that I done before so I hope you like it what I done thanks.

Think Board

Hey guys, so this is a new think board that I just did today and it has a different equation to the other think board so I hope you like it.

Thinkboard

This is a think board that   my class has been working on today and I hope you like it.

Spirnting Top Tips

These are spirnting top tip for running fast why we did this because atheletic for our school.
Is coming up so when we do the relays we know how to run fast and if you want to
check it out the you are welcomed go on I know you want to.

Sun Smart

This is a poster about sun smart that 

me Peter and Sitaleki done and we made up 

some song and if you know some facts then read what on the the poster.   

Book club the cloud rider

Connector

Your name……Lolo…………………………………………… date…………15/09/2015………………..

Book…The cloud rider…………………………………………………………………….pg…1…to pg…22…

There are three kinds of connections we may make when reading;

• text to self: when we have had similar experiences or feelings to a character or characters in the book
• text to text: when we see similarities between what we reading and other books we have read. This could be things like setting, character/s or storyline or genre of the book.
• text to world: when we see similarities between what we are reading and things that happen in the real world.

• Make notes below of any connections you may make from the passage you have just read.
• Indicate what kind of connection it is by writing TS, TT, or TW.
• Ask other members of the group to share any connections they may have made

Connection	TS/TT/TW
It reminds me of the bird that fall of the tree at my house.
reminds me of when there was a storm and things outside were falling off.
I reminds me of like a leaf falling off a tree and it gets walked on.
reminds me of anything I see that falls.

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This is my book club work which I am the connector and what I do for connector is I write that relates to the

story The cloud rider.

My rugby world cup team

In McChon class we have been learning about the Rugby world cup and in our class we have these random.
Picker and in the it has all the country's that is playing in at the rugby world cup we click it and where the picker points that the country that they. write about and I got France.

Back to the future

In McCahon class we have been talking about how did Auckland look like in 1852
what looks different and how does it looks back then and how does it looks like Now in the 20 first centre.

Conversation in Te Reo Maori

                                          Bula Vanaka 

                                          This is Me, Denzal and Lyle's Conversation in Te Reo Maori

                                           That we do today I hope you enjoy it.

The Viewer

Here is the link

Hi everyone, Mccahon class and I have been reading a book call. The Viewer by Shaun, Tan and the book was very interesting about the Melt box and what was in it and the pictures were interesting and weird and also in the book it said. Restless sleep and it means like you are having trouble with your sleep and your staring at the sailing and your angry cause your tring to sleep and that. Was one of our task to we had to get into 2 or 3 people to buddy up with and this is it it you want to hear the sound of me trying to sleep.
             

Rugby tourtament

These are photos that Mrs Archer who teach a year 5 class and these. Are that she took at the rugby tournament and I remember how James had to take off his clothes because he was heavy and he weighed 51kg and the coach. Told him to take off his T-shirt and we weighed him again and he weigh 49kg and if you want to comment then you are welcomed.

Remember when poem

That Was Camp.

Remember When I forgot to bring my cup and bowl and I had to use one of Mrs Archer's bowl and cup ?

Remember when I left I tooth brush at home and I said to all the boys that if they had one toothbrush that they bring to camp and they haven’t used it and then saunoa said I've got one and he gave me it to have and use ?

That was camp.

Remember When my group 3 was doing giants ladder and me and. James went up first we were both scared that we might fall off and die but the instructor Lisa said both of us you not gonna die you are just going to calm down carefully and then. Me and James want scared and then we worked as a team then we made to the top and we saw the amazing view and then we came back down carefully and that was hard ?

Remember when we went surfing and we had to talk about. What do we if we get into a rip and then after that we. went to the beach we were practicing how to surf and stand up and surf but that was the  hard thing and then the Instructor Gus he said if you want to catch a wave then come I went and a wave came and and Gus said you go and then I was surfing and then It was James turn and he caught a big wave but not bigger that Ashlyns. Ashlyns one was big very and then Gus let her and then the wave came and washed her and that was kind of funny?

That was Camp

Do you Remember when I was kayak surfing and a wave was coming and then. We both hopped on and whoosh the wave flipped over our kayak and I drank a mouth full of the sea water and that was disgusting and I went and told Mrs Archer and she said Lolo don’t drink any more of it ?

remember when I was doing the cookie challenge and I won the whole thing?

That was camp

Blog post on kereru schools blog

Mccahon class got told to comment on kereru schools blog and I went on to there blog and 

it said they had a school sleep over and I'm like cool and so jeolus cause we didn't get to do that at our school so I commented there.

This is my student conference presentation for my parent interview and if looks and sounds interesting then please comment.

I was looking around Room 8 blogg and nothing there interested me and then I scrolled up and it said Calf club and that interest me and  thought I would comment on it and I did.

Very Awesome cool facts about stars.

My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
outlines the main features of the subject
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
.include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

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Begin Writing Here:

Very Awesome cool facts about stars.

Introduction

My report is a about  everything that  I Know  about stars there are some

amazing facts so read and learn.

Types of stars

There are so many different stars in the universe but sometimes there lots of the same star.

The sun is not the biggest star and I know people say it is not a small star because there are lots of stars that is yellow and those stars are made of of heat the Sun is a yellow G2V dwarf star that can. Shine really bright the Supernova star it is  a big star you can’t find it you have to find it with a telescope in the sky.  Dwarf star it is a blue star the is small it looks like the ones that you can see from earth but it is hard to find in the universe.

The life Cycle of the stars and the death of the star.

There is a gas of clouds that is called.  Nebulae that it forms into a flat huge disc that is made out of clouds and in that disc there are hydrogen atoms and those hydrogen atoms and when it explodes then. it will turn into helium atoms and the hydrogen atoms and the helium atoms if those two atoms come together then it would explode and then there. Has been a star that is born and sometimes star are sometimes born in the nebulae  stars can die (how can they die ?) how they die is As their core runs out of hydrogen and helium they die.

General information about stars

Stars can live for billions of years but sometimes not because.  They die some stars are born in the nebulae which I think is not good did you know that star is a ball of hot gas that shine in the sky a. Nepution star is measured 20 kg across zole across nuclear fusion  Stars can form constellations and. Galaxies and there are stars that comes only on Matariki  Other people think that star twinkle it is not people often talk about stars burning hydrogen.

Conclusion

Thank you for checking out my writing I hoped it helped you with something about stars if you want to. Learn more about stars then click on this wesite http://www.enchantedlearning.com/subjects/astronomy/stars/twinkle.shtml  and I hope it helped you.

My Explanation writing about the Moon

The  Moon is a planet with lunar phases it is also an asteroid. The Moon is a great asteroid

and every night it changes different sizes and lunar phases are not caused by shadow. Hemisphere you

see the  waxing moon as a normal and waning moon as a backwards. Some believe the shadows are from earth and begin by explaining the Moon’s orbit of the Earth, and then go through the phases of the Moon.

As the   Moon’s orbit around the Earth is tilted from our orbit around the Sun  not shadows that cause.

Phases Its about the bright side of the Moon and when the Moon goes around the earth it shows more of it surface lit by the sun and the Moon and the Earth orbits the sun together .

It takes time for the moon to orbit the earth it takes when the moon goes around the earth it takes 25. Hour for it to go around the Earth when it goes around earth is change  shape when it goes around. Earth at the same time  it has eight phases and it changes when it orbit the earth.

Overall, if you want to learn more about why does the moon looks different the go to the website. I think it will help you with your learning click on this website.(http://www.sciencekids.co.nz/sciencefacts/space/moon.html ). I  hope my writing help you and thank you for checking it out .

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My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading:
is the question WHY DOES THE MOON LOOK DIFFERENT EVERY NIGHT?
My opening paragraph/introduction:
introduce what my writing is about in a clear way
hooks the reader
clear topic sentence and supporting sentences
2-3 sentences maximum
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
clear topic sentence and supporting sentences
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
connectives and time connectives
descriptive language
formal language
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found
write an interesting fact