The Moon is a planet with lunar phases it is also an asteroid. The Moon is a great asteroid
and every night it changes different sizes and lunar phases are not caused by shadow. Hemisphere you
see the waxing moon as a normal and waning moon as a backwards. Some believe the shadows are from earth and begin by explaining the Moon’s orbit of the Earth, and then go through the phases of the Moon.
As the Moon’s orbit around the Earth is tilted from our orbit around the Sun not shadows that cause.
Phases Its about the bright side of the Moon and when the Moon goes around the earth it shows more of it surface lit by the sun and the Moon and the Earth orbits the sun together .
It takes time for the moon to orbit the earth it takes when the moon goes around the earth it takes 25. Hour for it to go around the Earth when it goes around earth is change shape when it goes around. Earth at the same time it has eight phases and it changes when it orbit the earth.
Overall, if you want to learn more about why does the moon looks different the go to the website. I think it will help you with your learning click on this website.(http://www.sciencekids.co.nz/sciencefacts/space/moon.html ). I hope my writing help you and thank you for checking it out .
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Bonjourno Lolo,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your learning about the Moon, you included some interesting facts however the ordering of ideas was a bit confusing.
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