My Explanation writing about the Moon

The  Moon is a planet with lunar phases it is also an asteroid. The Moon is a great asteroid

and every night it changes different sizes and lunar phases are not caused by shadow. Hemisphere you

see the  waxing moon as a normal and waning moon as a backwards. Some believe the shadows are from earth and begin by explaining the Moon’s orbit of the Earth, and then go through the phases of the Moon.

As the   Moon’s orbit around the Earth is tilted from our orbit around the Sun  not shadows that cause.

Phases Its about the bright side of the Moon and when the Moon goes around the earth it shows more of it surface lit by the sun and the Moon and the Earth orbits the sun together .

It takes time for the moon to orbit the earth it takes when the moon goes around the earth it takes 25. Hour for it to go around the Earth when it goes around earth is change  shape when it goes around. Earth at the same time  it has eight phases and it changes when it orbit the earth.

Overall, if you want to learn more about why does the moon looks different the go to the website. I think it will help you with your learning click on this website.(http://www.sciencekids.co.nz/sciencefacts/space/moon.html ). I  hope my writing help you and thank you for checking it out .

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My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading:
is the question WHY DOES THE MOON LOOK DIFFERENT EVERY NIGHT?
My opening paragraph/introduction:
introduce what my writing is about in a clear way
hooks the reader
clear topic sentence and supporting sentences
2-3 sentences maximum
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
clear topic sentence and supporting sentences
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
connectives and time connectives
descriptive language
formal language
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found
write an interesting fact

My ABCYA word could

Malo'lele
This is my ABCYA word cloud it is about why does the Moon look different how it changes shape every night if you like it then you are always awolled to look at it.
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How to be a positive leaner in McCahon Class

Hi everyone,  this how to be a positive leaner in McCahon Class.


Growth minded set
Having a growth set mccahon is really important because if you a growth mind set then.
Your mind will grow bigger but if you have a fixed mind set then your
Brain stays the same size having growth mindset is like (I can do this, I think I know this)


Listening
In Mccahon you have to listen to the speaker otherwise you don’t know what to do but. When you listen you know what to do when you go back to your desk you have to know what to do. When you are on the mat you have to look at the speaker and listen what the the teacher is talking about so you know what to do when you go off and do your work.


Self guided
Being a self guided learner is being organised in the morning and alway doing your. Before school tasks and be initiative and being at the right place at the right being balanced and communicate with your team mate and being Opened - Minded.




Conclusion
These are all the things to be a Positive learner in Mccahon class by being
Self guided, listening, having a growth mindset these are all the things
to be a Positive learner in Mccahon class.